Paul- Levitation Topic- Portrait defies gravity or challenges scale. 1/1 0/1 0/1 Composition- Well composed/ simple & eye catching/ all parts add to illusion. 1.5/2 0/2 0/2 Creative- Unique/ visually challenging. .75/1 0/1 0/1 Technical- Lighting/depth of field/focus. 2.5/3 0/3 0/3 Editing- Realistic colour, lighting, shadows, image has been edited to give realistic illusion. 2.5/3 0/3 0/3 TOTAL: 8.25/10___0/10___0/10
8.25/30 Comments: I love the expression you have captured really makes me think he is excited about flying around the school. I don’t mind the slow shutter of the walking around the halls, but perhaps he should have movement blur too. Or have the hall have a radial zoom look where the centre focus subject zips forward remains clear and the areas around zooms backward. Shadow is a bit thick and would not look like that. Where are your other ones…
Paul- Levitation
ReplyDeleteTopic- Portrait defies gravity or challenges scale.
1/1 0/1 0/1
Composition- Well composed/ simple & eye catching/ all parts add to illusion.
1.5/2 0/2 0/2
Creative- Unique/ visually challenging.
.75/1 0/1 0/1
Technical- Lighting/depth of field/focus.
2.5/3 0/3 0/3
Editing- Realistic colour, lighting, shadows, image has been edited to give realistic illusion.
2.5/3 0/3 0/3
TOTAL:
8.25/10___0/10___0/10
8.25/30
Comments: I love the expression you have captured really makes me think he is excited about flying around the school. I don’t mind the slow shutter of the walking around the halls, but perhaps he should have movement blur too. Or have the hall have a radial zoom look where the centre focus subject zips forward remains clear and the areas around zooms backward. Shadow is a bit thick and would not look like that. Where are your other ones…